Very fuego. Loved the dynamic Tom brings into this relationship. A few lines had me chuck for sure. Dialogue is up to a ten here as well as inner dialogue. Dope work!
Thanks, Rachel! I never thought of it as world-building -- I always think of that for fantasy or sci-fi -- but I suppose you are right! Plus, some things are classics for a reason. And the Jazz Age left us many classics. Appreciate you reading along on my little adventure 🥰
Very fuego. Loved the dynamic Tom brings into this relationship. A few lines had me chuck for sure. Dialogue is up to a ten here as well as inner dialogue. Dope work!
Thanks, EMR! Every time someone compliments my dialogue, I feel like my screenwriting degree wasn’t 100% wasted. 🥰
So fun! The world building is amazing. A dip back into the 00’s mashed up with the 20s and how it all fits together beautifully!
Thanks, Rachel! I never thought of it as world-building -- I always think of that for fantasy or sci-fi -- but I suppose you are right! Plus, some things are classics for a reason. And the Jazz Age left us many classics. Appreciate you reading along on my little adventure 🥰
It’s great! I love it!